Rainbow's End

Recount

Planning: The Yr 7’s went on a tip to rainbow’s end we got
into groups and we enjoy it. 

On Wednesday the 20th of November All of the Yr 7’s went

to rainbow’s end but we had to go in our group.

When we got in our group

we had to talk and in my group there was Lennox Hope

Jarreka Pifeleti Elizah and Mamarae. Also our

helper was my friends brother his name was Silas,

when we got there we saw different schools there and

we had to wait for the bus.

The other bus took a little long and then they came and

we got in and then we

put on the thing so that we can go on the rides, me and

my group we went on the roll a coaster and more.

The one I like was the cars one because i like to dive

and i also like the feer fall

Because when the people go up they go scary and

when they fall down it's funny because I can hear

them from where  I was.

And there was more happiness there too.

And i also like Rainbow's End 

    

Keyhole Narrative

Keyhole Narrative

4 friends had an awesome idea but there names was Lennox, Recce, hunter,
and Donte.They loved to pick on people because they were some bullies
when they were looking for more people to bully they saw an old shop.
They fort that some people were in there but when they got in they saw
no one they don't know what to do because there was lots of candy.
When the boyz got one candy each also they did not look at the date, i
t was off so they just ate.
When Recce took the first bite Recce was getting light headed Hunter
ask Recce do you need a medical reason.Recce ask NO!! Then start
eating no Recce said i think that it is off Hunter said no Recce told
Hunter to look at the date so Hunter look and it was 1000 years old
Hunter look and he did not care but he still drop it was. But when he
drops the candy shop was moving there were some boosts under the
candy shop the 4 boyz
fort it was a joke but Recce ask Hunter and Lennox it was not a joke.

So they did not care, when they stood there for the whole day in the
candy shop but they were just getting
bored in there so they got out of the shop and saw that they were so
high up in the sky.
And then they saw a door they got in the door and there was some
hard levels there was a kill
robot it killed Donte with the robots gun.So it was the 3 boyz left him
but Donte was not full dead

  To Be Continued

NOT!!!!! So the robot full killed Donte it was a bad lost for them, but they
did't care because he was just a little kind and
they don't like kind people. they saw a little keyhole they tried to look what
was in there but there heads was blocking
the keyhole.They did not think about one looks in because they was to
scared and then thy saw the robot with Donte's head on his back like a
backpack and then Recce almost die but the robot short the door and then
they left never to be seen again.

20 Years from now the 3 boyz had sons that just look like them but
they was kind wow one was but the two of them was not kind they was
just like there dad's but there dad's did not like that but when they went
out looking for them but them they die
.where they die wow one of them died on the door way and the too died
next the the old flying candy shop.

AND THAT IS THE END

Keyhole Narrative Pt 2 writing plan

For this week we had to do a narrative and also we had to do a along plan about where the places is and who are the characters and what happens in the story.

Choose It Narrative

Choose It Narrative

Begin Writing Here:

One boring day there was a man named him because he had no name so people just
called him michcoll because he looks like his name was that and he ask I likes it.
On the same day he like riding boats and going on tips to places.One day he ask him
let’s get a boat, when got to the boat lunch a little boat the man that looks after
the boats said that they were gone but michcoll just got it THE END 

Complex sentences

How to be a good son

Title How to be a good son

introduction 

Do u want to know how to be a good son?  Being a good son means that you need to be respectful, helpful, and have a positive attitude 

Showing respect to your family makes you a good son.Showing respect means saying or doing the right thing at the right time. For example, if you want to do something to help your mum with some stuff you get of the game and you do it. To be a helpful poison you help people even the people that you don’t know.Also like people if they are holding a lot of stuff well help them.as being a helpful poison be respectful to them, even the ones that are older than you.For example when see a man that's older than you ask him if he needs help. Or just wave at him.How to have a positive attitude is when you be happy and listen to who is in front of you.To have a positive attitude for example when your mum tells you to do something you do it and if you don’t do it then your mum comes in the room, you don’t have the positive attitude because your mum turn off your game.


So to be a good son or a good daughter you be helpful, showing some respect and also you have a positive attitude and that's how you be a good son and a daughter.

Figurative Language Game

Number 28

Number 28

Early in the morning there was a loud noise coming from outside I looked out the Window there was nothing so I went back to bed. 

Advertisements persuasive of not

THE SCHOOL DAY SHOULD END

My prior knowledge of persuasive writing

In room 1 on the first week of school we had to do the word persuasive.persuasive means

the words that i have done.

Blog Analysis

My favorite past time

today i have did this, this is what i have did and i am not done this is all i did 

My favorite past time

Every time it's the weekends or holidays i get to play fortnite because me
and my cousin’s and my dad,
we also we play at day and night so we can get lots of wins.And this is why
Heaps of people play this
because  
Fortnite is so addictive because when you lose, you only lose by a hair.
Players in this game have deceptively
low hp even with full shields and health They made sure that gun fights
almost always result in one
player winning only by the skin of their teeth.On the other hand though, the
Fortnite map is yuge.The
kids and adults like
to rage on  fortnite because they die in a bad why and it is because it is so
funny when some of the
people gets so Angry at the game.And I like to play with my family,
because me and my cousin and also my  dad.

Pro people in fortnite

in fortnite there is so many good players in fortnite there is TSM squad,  
Faze clan, team liquid and team solomid and there is many more squads and there is some
solo in fortnite like ninja and Ali-A and Darren Sugg and more.

Tokyo informative writing

Title Be clever! Hook your reader	Tokyo
Classification Introduce your topic. Tell who, where or what it is	Tokyo is the largest metropolitan area in the world, hosting over 36 million people spread over three prefectures. Tokyo was formerly known as “Edo” in the 20th century. The name was changed to Tokyo in 1890 in light of the Meiji Restoration.
Describe 1st element Subheading 1	Also the food at is at Tokyo is nice there are Sushi, Ramen, Tempura, Sukiyaki, Udon, Soba, Okonomiyaki, and Chicken.There is so many nice food in Tokyo, more nice food there too.
Describe 2nd element Subheading 2	Population
Describe 3rd element Subheading 3	Famous Landmarks The Tokyo sky tree and the Sen so-ji
Describe 4th element Subheading 4	The history of the city of Tokyo stretches back some 400 years. Originally named edo, the city started to flourish after Tokugawa Ieyasu established the Tokugawa Shogunate here in 1603.
Conclusion -Summarise OR -Question your topic/findings OR -Write a personal statement/reflect

Tokyo

Tokyo is Japan's capital and the world's most populous metropolis. It is also one of Japan's 47 prefectures, consisting of 23 central city wards and multiple cities, towns and villages west of the city centre. The and Ogasawara Islands are also part of Tokyo. Prior to 1868, Tokyo was known as Edo.

Food

Also the food at is at Tokyo is nice there are Sushi, Ramen, Tempura, Sukiyaki, Udon, Soba, Okonomiyaki, and Chicken.There is so many nice food in Tokyo, more nice food there too.

Sports

The sports that is in Tokyo are tai chi, baseball, sumo fight, karate and football They are cool sports and there more cool sports.

All about Africa

Title Be clever! Hook your reader	Africa
Classification Introduce your topic. Tell who, where or what it is	Did you know that if the Africa people don’t look after the  animals and they will die
Describe 1st element Subheading 1	The african people have some cars
Describe 2nd element Subheading 2	They have lots of houses
Describe 3rd element Subheading 3	There is lots of people in Africa
Describe 4th element Subheading 4	Kill for food African people They get lots of food  now because they kill the animals. And also how do they live
Conclusion -Summarise OR -Question your topic/findings OR -Write a personal statement/reflect	They have cool animals in Africa

Begin writing here:

All about Africa

Today I am talking about Africa, there are  over 1.216 billion people in Africa.In Africa they have  no cool cars because they are poor they have some trash cars.In africa they have lots of  houses also in Africa when the people of Africa when they do not have much food they kill for the  food.When the African people see animals they will kill the animals and they will cook it and eat it, the vast majority of peoples speak related languages of the Bantu family. The Luba, Lunda, Fang, Mongo, Kuba, Songe, and Chokwe are  among the larger ethnic groups of west-central Africa.The Bambuti Pygmy peoples live in the eastern forests, and smaller groups of Pygmy peoples live  in the western forests of Gabon consider Africa population growth a bit frightening, with predictions placing the continent's population at 2.4 billion by 2050. By 2100, more than half of the world's growth is expected to come  from Africa , reaching 4.1 billion people by 2100 to claim over 1/3 of the world's population.May 11, 2019

As of 2012, approximately 1.3 billion people were living in 54 different countries in

Africa, Africa  is a resource-rich continent, In 2013 Africa  was the world's fastest growing continent at 5.6% a year, and GDP is expected to rise by an average of over 6% a year  between 2013 and 2023.

The food in Africa

In some areas, traditional East African  consume the milk and blood of cattle, but rarely the meat. Elsewhere, other peoples are farmers who grow a variety of grains and vegetables. Maize corn is the basis of ugali, the local version of West Africa’s fufu.Ugali is a starch dish eaten with meats or stews.

Ride the Eagle 2st draft

When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.

Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have the FIVE elements of plot.  You will be creating a plot line after your story is complete. This may help you add more details into your story before publishing.

Remember what we learnt in Term 1 about:

1. Hooking your Audience
2. Showing not Telling your story
3. Compound and Simple Sentences

Riding the eagle

There was two boys they liked  doing crazy things there names was
Jeff and Jake they were
also like brothers.
There mums said they needed to gown up the,
the boys did not listen they wanted to do a crazy thing.
One day they saw a big eagle it was a size of a room, Jeff and Jake saw it on a  beach

Jeff exclaimed” let’s  jump on it.”

Jake Shouted” DO SOME EXPLOSIVE DYNAMITE IN THE WATER.”

Jake hollered” let’s just come here tomorrow and do it.”

Jeff yelled” NO WE NEED TO RIDE ON THE EAGLE TODAY!”

Jake was just two tired to ride the eagle, Jake wanted to go bed.

 

the world's smallest dragon

letter to mrs molal

Hi mrs molal my goal for 2019 is learning about maths and reading.
My hobbies is playing fortnite and help them  to win the game.
I like running around playing board games and when I'm hot i go pools
.i like to share with people my things at home and school.My favorite food is
KFC pizza and my favorite ice cream is orange chocolate chips.

My family:

my dad  is 31 year old He is Maori.His favorite games are fortnite  and rugby
.My mum's culture is Cook Island my dad and mum and lives in 1 bagnall ave
and my 4 sister lives there two with my nan lives there and my Grandpa
passed
away on the 9th of October.

School history:

I was at school when i was a year 1 and.Now i am a year 7 at pt england
school
When i was a year 5 i  made jokes.