Once upon a time there was a monster his name was big Foot.
Later on that day At the Village there was only 16 people at the Village.
they had no food and no water so they went in the forest to look for some food.
When they got to the forest it was dark 8 went back to the village to get some Lights
.When they got the lights they went back to the forest.
The other 8 people was looking around the forest.
They said go and splutter up.
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sia and I attend St Pius X School.
This story was very interesting when I began to read it. I think you need to work on details and maybe continue to finish this off.
Other than that, great job!