Don't Let Go

Once upon a time there was a girl called Jazz. She liked to buy the homeless some food every day. One day in her head she began to think, It took her 5 days for her to think. And then she had an idea, It was not bad but Jazz gave it a go.It took Jazz A long time to look for some homeless, But then she found some helping other people. Jazz asked them if they wanted to come to her house for dinner, They all said YES!!....

When Jazz finished cleaning her whole house she called them, Jazz called her 3 brothers Mick,James and Nick. All from her family, She asked if they wanted to come over for dinner. Some of them said no, But Mick came. With his family, When some of the homeless came they were shocked to see the  famous Mick, jazz called for them but then did  not respond.

Jazz Asked the homeless what their names were, But they never answered back. They were so shocked to see Mick. Jazz got jealous.

It was finding time for the homeless to go to their own house. Mick had A long day at Jazz house. Finding Mick went home to rest, When it was to next day Jazz got out of bed and went to go and have some breakfast. When she was down she wanted to go for a ride in her new car. When she got outside her car was gone from her house. She was so shocked, She never felt this shocked in A long time.

When Jazz got to  the homeless house She saw her car with 3 people in it. She ran as fast as she could, and found Lennox and Reece in her car with someone  else. Jazz yelled
“YO GET out of my car”
 Hunter and Reece asked “This is our car”.The two guys got their guns out and said. We will give you 5 seconds to run. An old man came out of nowhere and jumped the two guys and the old man and Jazz ran away.
                                                  Never to be seen again….
                                                        To be continue

This week room 1 had to do a narrative. the Walt for this week is to write a narrative using dialogue. We are learning how and where to put dialogue. We are learning more about dialogue.