Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have the FIVE elements of plot. You will be creating a plot line after your story is complete. This may help you add more details into your story before publishing.
Remember what we learnt in Term 1 about:
- Hooking your Audience
- Showing not Telling your story
- Compound and Simple Sentences
Riding the eagle
There was two boys they liked doing crazy things there names was
Jeff and Jake they were
also like brothers.
There mums said they needed to gown up the,
the boys did not listen they wanted to do a crazy thing.
One day they saw a big eagle it was a size of a room, Jeff and Jake saw it on a beach
Jeff and Jake they were
also like brothers.
There mums said they needed to gown up the,
the boys did not listen they wanted to do a crazy thing.
One day they saw a big eagle it was a size of a room, Jeff and Jake saw it on a beach
Jeff exclaimed” let’s jump on it.”
Jake Shouted” DO SOME EXPLOSIVE DYNAMITE IN THE WATER.”
Jake hollered” let’s just come here tomorrow and do it.”
Jeff yelled” NO WE NEED TO RIDE ON THE EAGLE TODAY!”
Jake was just two tired to ride the eagle, Jake wanted to go bed.
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